One thing that bothers me is that flying begins in a very innocuous fashion, which would mislead many readers into thinking it is something that it isn't. This has made me wonder if perhaps I should add a kind of prologue to give the reader a foretaste of what I consider the best parts of the book... or whether I should simply leave it as a surprise. I created the book cover to give some impression of what lies ahead in the story. Could that be sufficient, I wonder?
It is, of course, free to read or download from my website at:
(Crossposted from http://miriam-e.dreamwidth.org/327242.html at my Dreamwidth account. Number of comments there so far: )